Hello everyone. This is a fictional story I am writing. It deals with the test of friendship and how far one is willing to go in order to reach a desire. Please comment below your reviews, comments, etc!!! :-) Enjoy.
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Where I live, Saumur is as French as you can get. It is a tiny little spec
of a town buried in the west of France, often overlooked much like its people. I
understand why though; the monotonous buildings incline towards the grey sky in
a dreary sort of way. Saumur is no match against the swank and elegant
movements of Paris. Despite gloomy townspeople peddling around milk cartons,
history thrives through our very stone walls. At one point, this cheerless town
acted as a backdrop for the French Revolution with a grand military background.
If we are known for something it is our patriotism.
My name is Agate Accault, daughter of the town drunk - Augustin. My father
has been drinking ever since my mother died days after birthing me; a burden
that haunts me every day. She used to work as a laundrywomen in the charity
hospital near us. When I turned 11 last month, I took her place. My father
reminds me every day of the life I have bestowed upon him and the rest of our
family; the timid and scruffy beings moving through our stone house. Never have
I ever heard papa yell at me for his loss, but drinking out the depression alone
is a subtle yet loud hint. My older siblings are the people I admire very much.
If you are wondering, I have 2 brothers Elliot and Perou, 4 years older than
me, along with Margette and Suze; twins and both 17. "All of us were born
to protect each other" Suze told me frequently when I couldn't fall asleep. I
would lay in her arms during windswept nights and be reminded of how blessed I
am. How blessed I am for having such strong-willed, passionate, and loving
siblings. Despite the hardships that block our lives from normality, these
children maintain a statue like composure, showing no fear towards others.
Albeit being raised by a single father I have always felt close to Madame Devolle.
Madame Devolle, or as she prefers-Mama Jeanne is always a second, if not,
actual mother to me. She fills the maternal gap that a brusque and headstrong
father cannot reach. Jeanne worked alongside my own mother, Elise, as a
laundrywoman herself. I continuously hear stories of how my mother expected
great things for me. These are the
things people long to hear for: hope and faith. That hope isn't given
directly from my mother’s chapped lips but instead passed on through Jeanne
Devolle’s warm hazel eyes. She too has a daughter, the same age as I. They call her Gabrielle. Gabby is a free spirited beam of light, that is for sure. I love her as
much as I love Suze, or Margette. We are two roughed up girls from the wrong
side of town looking for a way out. Well, at least, that is what she always
tells me.
She prefers coco, says it makes her feel glamorous. Simple, and elegant,
coco.
“Listen to me Aggie, and listen to me well” Coco hollers over her back as
we tread our way to the local schoolhouse.
“Oui ma cherie!” I hurry to follow her, when Gabby hummed the words ‘listen
well’ I expect an intervention on my outfit or a life lesson on how
black is the leading color in the world of “Kooture"
She turns to face me and gives me a grin, wide enough to bring life into the
now wilted rose bushes surrounding our trail. “I have a great feeling about
something”
“About what? Today’s grammar test?? Well I mean I-“
“NO! Forget grammar, forget school, I had a dream”
“About what?”
“I had a dream I was dressed in Chinese silk, the kind you get at the really
expensive boutiques, the kind you would adorn with pearls! It was amazing! Yes,
and people were looking at me. There was something in their eyes- they KNEW me.
They ADMIRED me. They saw that I had worth in this world! It was so beautiful.
And you know what?”
“What? I say, this time I'm listening.
“I have a great feeling that wasn’t just a dream. I have a feeling it was
God tapping me on the head telling me to wait for the near future. I will end
up with that dress around my ankles, I will be kissed by ever king that rules
the seven seas.”
It takes me a long time to form some sort of response. All I can do is nod
because frankly, I'm of breath. It could have been the hilltop we ran
down, or Coco’s seemingly unreal daze she suggests is “God’s message.” Somehow
though, she picks up on my expression.
“Agate Accault daughter of Augustin, what happened to the happy expression
we arrived with? You do believe me, don’t you?”
“I..really don’t know. We aren’t meant for glamour, I mean look at us. We
are working class, we come home to run down lodges. We eat cold soup. This is
the life we are meant to live. I love you Coco, but you see you and I are stuck
in this world. One day we will marry, maybe we might get lucky enough to marry
a teacher. Other than that, I see no pearls."
Gabby looks shocked, repulsed even. I could see that she always recognized
this isn’t the life she is meant to live. Albeit being 11, this vivacious girl
imagines a realm of possibilities in luxury. Frankly, a part of me does too. I
think back to when my mother thought I too, would end up a huge success. Maybe
I could finish life with the accomplishment of a higher education. Writing
Novels are what I want to do in life. I have so many stories to tell. Gabby,
being the other half of my heart, and knowing my personal anatomy picked up on
my self-doubt. I guess that is why we are best friends – we know each other too
well.
Gabby sighed. “Have you ever heard of Louis Vuitton?” She starts to stride
towards our destination once more. I have just recently noticed we stopped in
the middle of a forest. I began to walk too.
“No, should I?”
“Louis Vuitton was born to a farmer’s life. Now imagine that, what could be duller?
Well he saw no opportunities in the fields of cotton and barley. So you know
what he did? He ran away and never looked back. Louis decided it was time to
express himself through the busy high life of Paris. Voila, from the provincial
life to Paris! He found refuge in an apprenticeship for a box-maker. Monsieur
Vuitton worked and worked and worked, never stopping to get where he wanted to
be…”
“And where was that?” I asked frustrated because frankly, I didn’t understand
the point of this story.
“To the Royal Court of course! Now he makes boxes for the EMPRESS herself!
All sorts of luggage in an assortment of designs, it is a dream come true. You
know, he is an icon in fashion.”
How do I know you are not making this up?”
“Maybe I am, maybe I am not. Maybe Louis Vuitton is a figment of my
imagination, or a big bellied drunk but who cares! The moral of the story is to
chase after your dreams.” Gabby pauses with grace, looking around our
surroundings. Recording every single bush and building as if it was her last
time. “We are like Louis Vuitton; we were born into the wrong life. Scrubbing
floors and having children for pensions is not what we should intend on accomplishing,
that is not what stars do. That is NOT what we do. You will become a famed novelist,
and that is final.”
Gabby always talked with a sense of calmness and assurance that made you
believe everything she said, this time her tone dripped with the utmost
confidence. I could tell, even without looking her eye to eye that she only
spoke the truth. So I did what anyone else drunk with giddiness did, I believed
her.
“You know what Gabrielle you can reign the throne of fashion, and I will be
a famed novelist. We can visit each other over tea and gossip about the social
season. When I have enough money I promise to buy ever hat and broach from your
fashion house."
She yelps and flung her arms around me, “And I will never stop reading the
stories you conjure from that amazing brain of yours."
Then, all of a sudden, she frowns.
“What’s wrong?”
“You know, I still haven’t figured out what I will call my future fashion
company! Nothing comes to mind that really pops.”
“Really? How about La Gabrielle, or Chez Coco. Or your favorite colour, Le
gris”
She giggled and made a jokingly grossed out face “Non, non, non!”
“Hmmm, how about..Chanel?”
She said it a few times to herself and that olive skinned face began to light
up with joy again. “It’s simple yet elegant, so like me!”
I laugh. This time, I'm not laughing out of ignorance or at how foolish Coco’s
brain can get. This time, I laugh at how happy one can be with the knowledge
that life will be okay. That people like Coco, and maybe even a little bit of me
are so determined to leave a mark on this world.
With that thought, we continued to school, the little Tuffeau chalet nested in dark pine trees. We passed through the town and that potential I so frequently see plastered on Coco's face seemingly transforms onto mine, as well.
cant wait for the next chapter!
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ReplyDeleteYour writing is very good but the story is not that interesting yet.
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